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You're Cute When You Scream by ~22417004906905:icon22417004906905:



There was a time when I expected this to end happily, a time when I thought that there was no possible way that this could end with my heart broken. But sadly, I was disgustingly wrong.

Obviously I didn’t plan on you breaking my heart; I didn’t plan on finding you and her together in an embrace meant only for lovers. I’m also quite certain that you didn’t plan on me exacting revenge. How could you have possibly known that I am the type of woman who holds a vendetta, that when I have been wronged I seek to right it? The truth is, you couldn’t have because all I’d ever shown you was the side in which I hid behind you, waiting for you to deal with my problems for me.

I’m really regretful that I had to kill you, honestly. But darling you brought it upon yourself. When you associated yourself with another woman in such an inappropriate way I had to take action, you of all people cannot blame me; you always said to stand up for myself. I may feel apologetic about what I did, but I admit I had to do it and that I enjoyed it immensely.

Slicing your fingers off one by one, peeling back your skin to reveal muscles, opening your stomach and mixing around your insides. . . When I slit your throat I’d never felt more alive than in that moment. And love, trust me. You’re cute when you scream.
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Author's Comments

First off, obviously I stole the title from the song "You're Cute When You Scream" by Senses Fail, but that's it. ^^

For the Flash Fiction of the month for the club :iconwriteaway: It's EXACTLY 250 words. I know, I'm amazing! The subject was guilt/regret/remorse.

Please comment! I know I haven't written in a while!

Comments


:iconbleeding-pain:
ok so, it says "in the arms of another man" so, r u a boy or girl? (lol i just want to know bcuz i thought mike was a girl for the first 6 months i knew him)

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"When we touch, you are my skin, hold all of my joy inside of you. When you go, I wither."
-Ellen Hopkins
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XDXDXD I'm a girl, and I don't understand what you mean? I am pretty confident (I double checked) that it only mentions being with another woman. And it's not about me or anything, it's just a story. Though the character is a woman.

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"You haven't lived until you've taped someone to a wall."
-Me

"Though my day has been bad enough that me turning into a potato would not be entirely unexpected."
- The Game [link]
:iconbleeding-pain:
oh really? i need glasses lol XD

but yeah... i thought he was a girl for the first 6 months. then my friend aubrie sent me a link to his pro (not knowing i knew him) and said "hey check this guy mikes profile" lol

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"When we touch, you are my skin, hold all of my joy inside of you. When you go, I wither."
-Ellen Hopkins
:icon22417004906905:
XDXDXDXDXD Nice. But also, I did say that I'm Mike's sister. That would be your first guess.

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"You haven't lived until you've taped someone to a wall."
-Me

"Though my day has been bad enough that me turning into a potato would not be entirely unexpected."
- The Game [link]
:iconbleeding-pain:
OH! lol, i think i ahve all timers XD

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"When we touch, you are my skin, hold all of my joy inside of you. When you go, I wither."
-Ellen Hopkins
:iconshellysaurus:
Oh how terribly gruesome, you horrible child.
:iconimhorrifiedplz:

Don't you think that will make any boyfriend of yours terrified? XDDD

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In the year 3000 YouTube, Twitter, and Facebook will merge into one super time-wasting website called YouTwitFace.
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You're a meanie poo poo head!!!!

XDDD Actually, he was confused. BUT AS LONG ANY BOYFRIEND OF MINE DOESN'T CHEAT THAT'S OKAY.

--
"You haven't lived until you've taped someone to a wall."
-Me

"Though my day has been bad enough that me turning into a potato would not be entirely unexpected."
- The Game [link]
:icon22417004906905:
XDDDDDDDD

--
"You haven't lived until you've taped someone to a wall."
-Me

"Though my day has been bad enough that me turning into a potato would not be entirely unexpected."
- The Game [link]
:iconbleeding-pain:
lol what have u been up to

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"When we touch, you are my skin, hold all of my joy inside of you. When you go, I wither."
-Ellen Hopkins
:icon22417004906905:
Talking to my boyfriend.

--
"You haven't lived until you've taped someone to a wall."
-Me

"Though my day has been bad enough that me turning into a potato would not be entirely unexpected."
- The Game [link]

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